Monday, 4 May 2020

Nate's writing 4/5

Retell the story of Jack and the beanstalk

Jack and the beanstalk
Jack lives with his mum and they had no money or food. They had a cow Jack had to sell the cow but he swapped it for magic beans. Jack came home and told his mother but she was angry at him so she threw them out the window. Then Jack went to bed hungry. The next morning he woke up and looked out the window then he saw a giant beanstalk growing in his garden that went up over the clouds so he decided to climb it when he got to the top he saw a giant castle. when he slipped under the door he saw a giant eating his dinner. The giant sheltered bring me my bag of gold when the giant was not looking Jack stoll the bag of gold then slipped under the door again and slided down the beanstalk and ran in side and said mum some gold. When the gold started to run out Jack climb the beanstalk again then under the door and stoll the the hen that laid golden eggs then he when back down the beanstalk and ran back inside to tell his mother. But his mother said to not go up the beanstalk again. After awhile he climbed the beanstalk for the last time. Then the giant got his harp it stared to play little stum then Jack raced over there and grabbed the harp and it started to play loud music then the giant woke up and chased Jack back down the beanstalk and grabbed his axe then started to chop it down, then the beanstalk from the clouds and the giant was never seen again and Jack and his mother lived happly ever after


By Nate       

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